Friday, 24 July 2015

Persuasive Writing: win a holiday to Hawaii

Buy some tickets get the right tickets and you will win a holiday to Hawaii. It has all the things you need. It has big trees that have coconuts on them. Specific name coconut trees. Giving you lots of shade because Hawaii is always very sunny. They also have lots of Hawaiian dances like the hula to entertain you. So go to Hawaii a relaxing sunny beautiful island. Pick your hotel wisely. Some have pools some are big and some have good views. Like at the beach and at the forests. Hawaii has good cooks to make the flavour of the food to melt in your mouth. When you look at the ocean you can see it sparkling from the reflection of the shining yellow sun.

5 comments:

  1. Good work. I like how you described Hawaii.

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  2. Hawaii sounds really lovely , especially the sunny part and relaxing beaches .

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  3. What a awesome bit of writing Luke, I really like it now I think I do want to go to Hawaii

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  4. that is a awesome holiday Luke

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